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[URL="http://fuismgaming.com/images/flippingbook/Xsyon/movie.swf"]The First Edition to the Xsyon News! Click here[/URL]
the official first paper is out!
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Xsyon Citizen
Looks nice Furanku, one minor thing, Page one, lower section , "Altought the game has lunched" typo
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[QUOTE=Chavoda;69003]Looks nice Furanku, one minor thing, Page one, lower section , "Altought the game has lunched" typo [/QUOTE]
thanks will take a better notice next release.
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Xsyon Citizen
[QUOTE=furanku;68976][URL="http://fuismgaming.com/images/flippingbook/Xsyon/movie.swf"]The First Edition to the Xsyon News! Click here[/URL]
the official first paper is out![/QUOTE]
you call this a paper? It are only 4 pages...
Plus you can't call it official because you don't own that name anyways.
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[QUOTE=Monfols;69193]you call this a paper? It are only 4 pages...
Plus you can't call it official because you don't own that name anyways.[/QUOTE]
wow
OFFICIALOFFICIALOFFICIALOFFICIALOFFICIALOFFICIALOFFICIALOFFICIALOFFICIALOFFICIALOFFICIAL
happy?
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Xsyon Citizen
you are so cute sometimes furanku.
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Nice effort, bring more of it soon.
Typo on page 3, gold clubs should be golf clubs I presume?
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[QUOTE=Plague;69470]Nice effort, bring more of it soon.
Typo on page 3, gold clubs should be golf clubs I presume?[/QUOTE]
I think I will run 3 spell checkers now... lol JUST incase thanks for the input. I am working on Edition 2 currently.
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A spell checker will not find it. Gold is a proper word. What you need it someon to do a sanity-read before you publish it, like an editor
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[URL="http://fuismgaming.com/images/flippingbook/Xsyon/edition002/edition2.swf"]Xsyon Edition 02[/URL]
Second Edition of Xsyon News is out. Enjoy
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